I struggled mightily with this one. I wrote it back in November, but I was never quite happy with the beginning. So, I let it sit. Last night, I decided to finally get it out of my WIP file. I chopped a lot out, and I think it's better now...still, though, I wasn't sure of it. So, thanks!
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Date: Jan. 11th, 2009 04:39 pm (UTC)I struggled mightily with this one. I wrote it back in November, but I was never quite happy with the beginning. So, I let it sit. Last night, I decided to finally get it out of my WIP file. I chopped a lot out, and I think it's better now...still, though, I wasn't sure of it. So, thanks!